Dad

This home is not a home without you... It is silent without you... Walls are quiet without you... Air is still without you... Plants are hard without you... Mum is alone without you... She is incomplete without you... I am careless without you... Bro is tensed without you... Oh DAD!!! When you will be back? We three miss you a lot... Our life is not a life, It's just a PAIN... WITHOUT YOU!

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/16/2013 10:51:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup... Touching write.

Cherry Jain
Date: 5/17/2013 6:08:00 AM

Thanx.. 4m my heart.. Carol

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/12/2013 10:59:00 AM

Beautiful, heartfelt poem to your father, Cherry. Well done. Licia :-)

Cherry Jain
Date: 5/12/2013 8:51:00 PM

Thanx... Delysia

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/12/2013 10:34:00 AM

Lovely write, my dear! I love my father as well. I see you are new here! Hope you enjoy it! :)

Cherry Jain
Date: 5/12/2013 10:49:00 AM

Yup... n thanx Eileen Ghali

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/12/2013 5:08:00 AM

Such a stark, sad, and beautiful poem. You made every word count. I like that you noted the different feelings in the surroundings too. It took me back to when I was a child hoping, watching, and waiting for my father to return to the family.

Cherry Jain
Date: 5/12/2013 9:19:00 AM

Thanks.. Monterey Sirak. All these are my fellings for my dad. Missing him a lot! Hope, same was with you.