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Dachshund

Dachshund is a banana skin: Short like a cigarette butt, Big eyes like two snooker balls, Wide ears like the vessel's flags, Legs interlocked like a letter X, Long trunk like a train on the track, All buttock like a kangaroo. If I should meet it on my way out, I will retract home and recite a psalm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/28/2015 12:24:00 PM
good one, like it.
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:37:00 PM
KAYOD5, CONGRATS on your win ~ SK
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:41:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2015 2:35:00 AM
Lol... a humorous take on the topic... i almost started to imagine things... congrats on a worthy win... lov, nad!
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:25:00 PM
Haha.. Good write, Kayod5. Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:56:00 PM
hahaha, very imaginative in your description!!
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for the visit...huggs
Date: 1/7/2015 1:48:00 PM
I had such vivid imagery when I read this Kayod5 made me smile - good luck:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend...huggs
Date: 1/7/2015 11:55:00 AM
Cute one..I got a chuckle or two..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara for the visit and the comment;I am happy you like it...huggs
Date: 1/7/2015 11:03:00 AM
Oh love the visual here, brilliant poetry..
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Harry for your visit and the comment...huggs
Date: 1/7/2015 10:34:00 AM
Pleasure to read wonderful expressions Kayode!
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Date: 1/7/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Upma for this visit...huggs

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