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D I S C O M B O B U L a T E D

D i s c o m b o b u l a t e d By Dane Smith-Johsnen Deeply hidden In the back of my mind Somewhere, somehow Closets of pain Open and bombard My consciousness. Blistered by young loves' scorches Overbearing. Smitten. Why? Bewildered factions of trust Undeniably eroded Laughter to hide the pain Altogether crushed The heart of me cried. Endless tears for I am Discombobulated!!!

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Date: 10/5/2009 5:31:00 AM
Excellent Acrostic, Dane! Great imagery flows throughout this deep display of emotions. Wonderful, expressive poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/27/2009 9:35:00 PM
laughter to hide the pain altogether crushed The heart of me cried--heartfelt..we all are broken and shattered everynow and then yet there is always light after dark--God bless you Dane---Charma
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Date: 9/27/2009 4:50:00 PM
beautiful looseness to this poem!... jim
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Date: 9/27/2009 3:06:00 PM
I think we all are.....Thought provoking. Love Light Truth Patricia
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