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Cynosure

Cynosure Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Her birth began the moments of cherishing my sweet girl, her worth finds atonement through perishing my world. She stands alone in the brilliance of the sky with pink hues, tiny hands condone in an instance of wearing tiny shoes. Focus of attention on a center stage with children her age, a bonus without exemption, engaged in laughter, sweet Paige. She walks into a room and eyes drop with mouths closed, she talks to the moon surprised, lovely and composed. She tip-toes like a sweet angel and sleeps with a white halo, she flips and goes crazy and leaps like a state-wide tornado. Crowded around the princess like she owns her own throne, astounded and priceless, I know my arms she calls her home. Treated with utmost respect from her peers and family, created from prose and intellect, a dear girl, quite chatty. Growing up I always believed in innocent miracles for sure, when holding Paige I am relieved, my admirable cynosure. Date Written: June 20, 2016

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Date: 7/12/2016 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful, really. Congratulations
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Date: 7/6/2016 10:59:00 AM
A daughter who brings such joy and respect should be honored by this tribute to your love and faith in her. Well-done on a very personal piece, Laura. Congrats.
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Date: 7/2/2016 3:57:00 AM
A really cute poem about your lovely daughter:) Congratulations on your win, Laura:)
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Date: 7/1/2016 8:39:00 PM
Lovely! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/1/2016 8:14:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Luloo, on your fine Second Place podium win for your lovely poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
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Date: 6/22/2016 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Laura. Your sweet daughter seems to be the wonderful essence of 'cynosure' in the most brilliant and admiring way. Nicely written, and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/20/2016 8:09:00 PM
A lovely tribute for your little girl. I wrote one yesterday about my oldest daughter after a good deed. Children are a blessing. Cherish them.
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Date: 6/21/2016 9:31:00 AM
thank you Tim :)-luloo

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