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Cutting Deep

Paper-thin, metallic blue deepening further, slicing down, across from bone to bone. Garnet rivers, pooling into oceans, staining... Screams, screams fade “CALL AN AMBU..l..a....” (gone). A single response, a tear, gliding down... swift, before fading to black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 10:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patrick. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:37:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. happy holidays...
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