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Cupid Pulls Back the Bow

Cupid Pulls Back The Bow This café I have stopped to dine, with hopes I’ll meet my Valentine I’ve seen her here most every day, just never had the nerve to say I took my seat at table two and ordered what I usually do Then noticed something just not right my eyes they caught the strangest sight It sat up there upon a shelf with wings it looked as if an elf An arrow held within its hand, as if it had some evil plan When then as I sipped on my tea, I saw his arrow point at me His one eye closed, the other stared, by now I’m feeling really scared Just then she walked into the place, a perfect smile upon her face I watched her as she took her seat to order something good to eat She motioned me to join her there, come take a seat, this empty chair When suddenly from in my eye I saw his arrow start to fly I thought real quick, I had to duck, it missed me, that was my good luck Then hit the guy at table three who quickly dropped his cup of tea Oh boy, the look upon his face is one my mind can not erase I made my way to sit with her, She said, “I am so sorry sir” “I motioned not for you, you see but to the man at table three” He sat right down where she did dine and said, "Please be my Valentine" Something had come over him, his heart was feeling young again She told him that she felt the same and was so happy that he came They kissed as I just walked away, I felt so stupid on this day About the place my eyes did look in every cranny, every nook And there still sitting on the shelf, he shrugged his shoulders, did the elf And at that time I came to know, don’t duck when cupid pulls the bow 1/5/17 Written for the Cupid Pulls Back The Bow Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose

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Date: 10/6/2021 11:57:00 AM
Cute and engaging. How do you have so much talent dripping from a lil pen? I enjoy your work!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2021 1:45:00 PM
Thank you again for your encouraging words.
Date: 1/6/2017 9:06:00 AM
WoW! Chris, I loved, loved this. I enjoyed the story within the story. Everything was so vivid I could just just picture cupid sitting on the shelf, pulling back his bow aiming for the guy..... But darn he ducked. He had to watch his valentine give her heart to another. It most definitely reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis for making me smile this morning. I am more than happy you liked my poem today. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/6/2017 7:21:00 AM
Excellent Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary.
Date: 1/6/2017 1:37:00 AM
Love potion no. 9 will sometimes help too. Good luck in the contest, Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:33:00 AM
Darn, I'm fresh out, I have some #8 though, maybe I'll try that. :) Thanks so much Darren.
Date: 1/5/2017 9:48:00 PM
wow, Chris, this is SUPER creative. One of the best I have seen for this contest. GREAT JOB (as for exploring PG, umm, I don'T think so. I stay inside where it's nice and warm!!)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much.
Date: 1/5/2017 8:06:00 PM
Baaah haaaaaa haaa!!.. Enjoyed the heck out of this one!!.. Good luck in the contest my friend.. Arlene..
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thanks so very much Arlene.
Date: 1/5/2017 5:58:00 PM
Oh, this is definitely a winner. It's a delicious mix of lighthearted fun, romance with a touch of sadness and the lesson that love deserves a chance. An excellent poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so very much Christy, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/5/2017 4:07:00 PM
Very funny, Chris. I would have ducked too:) I wrote a funny one too and sent it to Rose but I did not post it. It had a dirty word in it:)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel. Just put the word "Bleep" in its place and post it, let our imaginations figure it out. :)
Date: 1/5/2017 3:57:00 PM
you spin the crazy bend of love, chris.. so delllightful!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette. Yep, the romantic poet didn't get the girl in the end. :)
Date: 1/5/2017 2:01:00 PM
LOL Now, that's a funny one Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thanks sweet Heidi, I am happy you got a chuckle out of this.
Date: 1/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
Very nice in its writing and its humor..I really like this one ..good luck in the contest
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thanks so very much Frederick.
Date: 1/5/2017 1:32:00 PM
You should have let cupid pull the bow straight into you...You should have won her heart..and a hole in your shirt too :) ..You are very funny :).Cant stop laughing...: ). I needed it :) .A fave.
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:59:00 PM
Yeah, I know...stupid me. :) Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy this one made you laugh. :)
Date: 1/5/2017 12:00:00 PM
Chris, this is a really GREAT narrative poem! I love everything about it! Janice
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks so very much Janis, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 1/5/2017 11:37:00 AM
Lol...Good one...I'm asking for table three next time I'm out to eat. Good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim. I appreciate it.

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