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Cupid Crowns You King of Creeps

I crown you the king of stupid Messing with a love that cupid Sent your way for you to hold But you have been very cold Freezing her heart till it makes Shattered pieces that just break A loving woman's will to live There's nothing else she can give Her care showed through every day With her actions she would say How much you meant in her life Never causing pain or strife Thinking her love was enough But you were so mean and gruff Even through the months of sorrow She'd be by your side tomorrow Trying to give all she had Through the good and all the bad You just see her loving side Not the tears she always cried Wondering what she was doing That you couldn't see her proving Her desires and devotion What ever gave you the notion To push her love to the curb Making you slowly disturb The feelings she had way down deep That you didn't want to keep Now she's gone leaving you with An empty feeling in the pit Of your lonely soul that seeps Because you were such a creep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/1/2013 2:15:00 PM
Wow what a great and cleverly written poem you have her my dear Robin!! My goodness, such a brilliant poem! Well put my dear Robin! great write! That creep! lol happy thanksgiving by the way my dear! apologizes for not commenting in a while! Hugs and kisses and love from the blue poet! xoxoxo :) :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:24:00 PM
way to tell it!! That creep!!!
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:47:00 PM
Great write. As I was reading this poem I thought about the husbands that think they've been blind sided when their wife's ask for a divorce, and I thought to myself these men should read your poem and see if the shoe fits.
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:32:00 PM
I am sure that everyone can relate to the feelings of frustration that you expressed so well here. Love bites sometimes! I really like this poem, Robin, so I am going to fave it! :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:44:00 AM
Awesome title about a difficult subject. Well done, and probably helps to relieve.
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