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CULTURED Once I was initiated. Then I made it. Once I was negated. Today I am contemplated. Now I am a jazzy lady. They call me Classy Daisy. I'm upward bound. I'm never down. I am so amazing. I am sophisticated! ~Rhyme Battle! (Round 3)! Free Poetry Contest Entry~ ~Entry Date: March 02, 2014~ ~Motif: Rhyme Couplet~

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Date: 3/3/2014 8:19:00 PM
I'm always impressed by a great rhyme and yours are amazing! Good luck in the contest! Great write!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Heather... Verlena
Date: 3/3/2014 2:41:00 PM
What makes a person sophisticated? I enjoyed the lightness of this write and it made me smile. Daisy's have that effect on me, especially classy ones.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2014 3:39:00 PM
I would agree.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 3:38:00 PM
Rick, living a god life does... Verlena
Date: 3/3/2014 2:27:00 PM
Nice positive vibe. A pleasing good rhyme.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Rob.. Verlena
Date: 3/3/2014 2:09:00 PM
Yes you are--all these things.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/3/2014 4:48:00 PM
Right, but these images, feelings and pronouncements cannot be summoned from nowhere. They must come from a genuine source--in this case, you.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Mark... You imagine this is me when Daisy is Daisy:). Verlena
Date: 3/3/2014 6:48:00 AM
- A happy & positive: "Classy Daisy" - Pleased to read - well done, Verlena ! - Luck in contest !! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise... Verlena
Date: 3/3/2014 4:54:00 AM
Nice flow, nice rhyme! Good work.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/3/2014 6:35:00 AM
Thanks Edwin... Verlena
Date: 3/2/2014 7:49:00 PM
Nice rhyming there Verlena ! way to go!...luv,Deb
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/2/2014 8:12:00 PM
Thanks Deb... Verlena

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