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Cube of Success So Sugary

The trademark was set to reach and to beat challenge is accepted to achieve the feat the reward is glamorous- that is the seat enticing to the Lion is the captured meat knows its class and never will settle for wheat gathering the harvest, deserving to eat crossing the huddles and facing the heat tasting such a good life definitely needs a repeat the road was piercing with lots of defeat but this story ends with success so neat.

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Date: 1/25/2016 6:55:00 PM
I do not know whether or not you are a lion that achieved the feat or seeking meat :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:17:00 AM
Still alive in the quest but the meat is very very close. Thank you so much Salehi
Date: 1/14/2016 11:18:00 AM
A happy ending ;) This type of write, with ending rhyme in each line is difficult to do and still make perfect sense, but you've achieved success neatly, too, Funom. Well done.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Lin Lane...

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