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Crystal Clear

Cool spring water, have a drink More refreshing, than you think Clear like a crystal Reflections of the moon light Dive right in, enjoy the night Feel the water's call

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/18/2012 10:57:00 AM
So, that is tail-rhyme! I love the title and the rhythm is very pleasant! Great write, Rick! Blessings, Hanitra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2012 11:24:00 AM
Hopefully I got it right and haven't led you down the wrong path.
Date: 11/17/2012 11:14:00 AM
Nice thought worded nicely. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/17/2012 8:00:00 AM
i've never done this form, Richard, this is again so inspiring, love the juxtapose,
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