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Her presence casts an aura independent of sunlight, like the glow of an angel. Passion and desire unite in a symphony of hope, orchestrated by my heart. She is a delicate breeze caressing all my senses, the first flower of my spring. And glimpsed through a teardrop her beauty is surreal, in its crystal clarity. Anticipation pumps my pounding heart on her approach, yet, she smiled and walked on by. And though my heart was breaking she simply continued on, like I wasn't even there. (Blank Verse) 2/17/2016

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:51:00 PM
Love the awesome turn at the end, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/17/2016 2:39:00 PM
Superbly written with passion and sensuality... '...glimpsed through a teardrop,' '...like I wasn't even there,' marvelous phrasing and imagery. BRAVO Emile! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Keith, your friendly comments are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/17/2016 1:16:00 PM
Wow!!! What a heart-thumping emotional journey this is. Powerful stuff here, Emile. Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Elaine, your visits are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/17/2016 12:46:00 PM
- Patience ....... hard at a young age :) - Lovely poem, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your visits are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/17/2016 11:37:00 AM
Emile, what lovely imagery your piece portrays...you make a common human experience, painfully, yet explicitly, exciting a reminiscent for me. I LOVE it....peace, jill
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.

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