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("Howling Rock" - 2016, Castle Rocks, Idaho) Crying Wolf My phone is set to the tone of a trumpet horn To signal incoming texts And every time it sounds I think of Robin Hood calling out for me. I think he must have been a disciplined And discerning fellow long ago In his Sherwood Forest, Because otherwise the woods would be filled With his call And eventually we Merry Men would grow weary And confused by the chatter. And so it is today As my phone sounds the horn Again and again, Like the boy crying wolf Asking only for some attention To ease his boring, lonely existence. This is the modern world after all, Ruled by comfort and instant gratification, And an increasingly pervasive sense of isolation; The insulated world of us all Now so far removed from the threat of wolves, Taking it all in, instead Through sheep’s eyes, Confident that all is well, as it should be, And if it isn’t Then surely, 'it can’t happen here'. My phone is finally silent As I compose these words Giving me time to think Of all that waits out there beyond my senses Breaking through not as a horn But as a distant howl Growing ever louder Beyond the boundary of my defenses. (1/21/24)

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Date: 1/21/2024 12:01:00 PM
This poem presents a clever and thought-provoking commentary on the modern world and the impact of technology on human connection. The use of the phone's trumpet-like tone as a symbol for incoming texts, evoking the image of Robin Hood calling out, is a creative and engaging metaphor.. The comparison of Robin Hood's disciplined and discerning character in Sherwood Forest to the potential chaos of a constant barrage of text notifications is a clever twist
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Silent One
Date: 1/21/2024 12:50:00 PM
I do not read books, so would not be good at reviewing them, movies, yes, I used to review them for BBC radio.. Thank you.
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James Moore
Date: 1/21/2024 12:41:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful response Silent One - it makes for an insightful observation on your part. I bet you also write good book and movie reviews! Cheers. James

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