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''Crying Out''

Lurking in shadows to wait for release. Overcome with denial. A soul with no peace. Out of the corner of an eye I see you pass. Fragmented image as clear as glass. Whispered voice with an unclear intent. Restless with questions. Between worlds your day is spent. How can I help? What for can I do? To give you resolution. To let live death anew. For The ''Ghost Poetry Contest....'' sponsored by...Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 6/28/2011 2:40:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me.I especially like the line "A soul with no peace".Thanks for stopping by and the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:03:00 PM
very creative write, good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on When You/re Young.
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:11:00 AM
Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Kacey. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:58:00 AM
truly awesome Kacey .. the reader becomes immersed in the lines .. luv the way u presented it for the contest..good luck my friend..this one is a treasure.. and winner too..luv..
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Date: 6/18/2011 9:14:00 AM
Good invention and nicely done. Wishing you luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.
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