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Crying In Whisper

In my country, Seeing smoky sky Is nothing, But Killing kids kills Me everyday, every minute Every second, No matter with Thundering bullets Or lightening rockets; It is being our daily habit No more choices: To die or but to die Silently without even a whispered Cry, Or a small bit of a registered grave; It is happening now just in my country!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/22/2016 8:43:00 PM
Bassam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:35:00 PM
thanks for your comment..
Date: 10/6/2013 9:46:00 AM
Hi Bassam,... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:36:00 PM
Hi Linda... I happy with your comment :)
Date: 10/3/2013 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature!!!! A wonderful read Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:37:00 PM
Juli.. thanks
Date: 10/3/2013 12:06:00 PM
Nice one here Bassam. It's a pity such things happen to children or to any one at all.
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:38:00 PM
Thank you for your comment
Date: 7/5/2013 10:14:00 AM
I do pray things are changing for the better. Light & Love
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:38:00 PM
Debbie.. we still have hope... thanks for your words.
Date: 2/19/2013 6:29:00 AM
very nice work
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:39:00 PM
Betty.. thank you
Date: 1/11/2013 4:03:00 PM
A pleasure to read your work this evening. I wish you'd write more! Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:41:00 PM
Debbie.. I promise you to start writing soon after long time since I published this one...
Date: 11/25/2012 9:46:00 AM
So frustrating and so hard to really understand from afar. In the US we can leave..so easily, we have roads, e have cars, we have freedom of movement and we don't understand..you can't even really leave..I hope writing helps a bit and you will do more of it. Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:43:00 PM
Debbie.. thanks for your words
Date: 11/22/2012 5:10:00 PM
Bassam, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:44:00 PM
appreciated your comments... thank you
Date: 10/18/2012 5:17:00 PM
A touching write up, all happening in Syrian, I know, human know, mankind knows, God knows........ Wonderful piece, poet
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:44:00 PM
thank you
Date: 9/8/2012 4:05:00 PM
wow Bassam, this is a powerful poem, and should be read by everyone of us.
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Date: 7/28/2021 12:45:00 PM
Hi Harry... appreciated
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:45:00 PM
Hi Harry... appreciated
Date: 9/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
Sorry, I did not notice the years the other piece was writen. But this tells the truth. I thought the peacefull message was government controled. This one opened my eyes.
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/28/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thank you for your comment...
Date: 6/21/2012 12:39:00 AM
nothing here static for long .one day the throne of your DICTATOR will be overthrow .so sad the pictures you give .jk
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 6/22/2012 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Jayachandra...That day is coming for sure....Bassam
Date: 6/20/2012 3:59:00 PM
sad how man kind has become so cold,that even children have become targets of evil,sorry, my prayers are with you
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 6/22/2012 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Richard...your comment makes me feel I am not crying alone....Bassam
Date: 6/19/2012 9:30:00 AM
Welcome to poerty soup. I enjoyed reading your sad poem. Look forward to reading more.
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 6/19/2012 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Joann for reading....:)
Date: 6/19/2012 12:22:00 AM
This is so sad...love your poem.
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 6/19/2012 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Twanna...your words appreciated :)
Date: 6/18/2012 4:01:00 PM
I liked reading from you,,,,, sad write,,,,, though well penned,,, I wish you a blessed day,,,,, Debbie
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Bassam Yassin
Date: 6/18/2012 4:25:00 PM
Debbie...Thanks for your reading & kind comment......Bassam

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