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Crying In Whisper

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Crying In Whisper

In my country,
Seeing smoky sky
Is nothing,
But Killing kids kills
Me everyday, every minute
Every second,
No matter with
Thundering bullets
Or lightening rockets;
It is being our daily habit
No more choices:
To die or but to die
Silently without even a whispered Cry,
Or a small bit of a registered grave;
It is happening now just in my country!

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Hi Bassam,... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 2:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your feature!!!! A wonderful read Love, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 12:06:00 PM
    Nice one here Bassam. It's a pity such things happen to children or to any one at all.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:14:00 AM
    I do pray things are changing for the better. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 6:29:00 AM
    very nice work

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:03:00 PM
    A pleasure to read your work this evening. I wish you'd write more! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:46:00 AM
    So frustrating and so hard to really understand from afar. In the US we can easily, we have roads, e have cars, we have freedom of movement and we don't can't even really leave..I hope writing helps a bit and you will do more of it. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:10:00 PM
    Bassam, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 5:30:00 AM
    Bassam, I am so sorry for all this killing. It sickens me, it really does. I am wishing you the very best. love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:17:00 PM
    A touching write up, all happening in Syrian, I know, human know, mankind knows, God knows........ Wonderful piece, poet

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 4:05:00 PM
    wow Bassam, this is a powerful poem, and should be read by everyone of us.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Sorry, I did not notice the years the other piece was writen. But this tells the truth. I thought the peacefull message was government controled. This one opened my eyes.

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 4:13:00 PM
    So sad.. InshAllah you'll find peace..

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 7/6/2012 4:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Asra....your comment is really appreciated....Bassam
  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:39:00 AM
    nothing here static for long .one day the throne of your DICTATOR will be overthrow .so sad the pictures you give .jk

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 6/22/2012 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jayachandra...That day is coming for sure....Bassam
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 3:59:00 PM
    sad how man kind has become so cold,that even children have become targets of evil,sorry, my prayers are with you

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 6/22/2012 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard...your comment makes me feel I am not crying alone....Bassam
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:30:00 AM
    Welcome to poerty soup. I enjoyed reading your sad poem. Look forward to reading more.

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 6/19/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joann for reading....:)
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 12:22:00 AM
    This is so your poem.

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 6/19/2012 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Twanna...your words appreciated :)
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 4:01:00 PM
    I liked reading from you,,,,, sad write,,,,, though well penned,,, I wish you a blessed day,,,,, Debbie

    Aljasem Avatar Bassam Aljasem
    Date: 6/18/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie...Thanks for your reading & kind comment......Bassam