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Cry of Love

The seashore holds me in grief entwined with moss and nettles while echoes return ...louder than seagull's cry in decibels of love's farewell ringing like a tower's gong. Contest 237, Brian Strand 13th Nov 2016

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Date: 11/15/2016 9:48:00 AM
Carly your poem is lovely CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 11/15/2016 9:25:00 AM
Very powerful, Carly. I enjoyed your poem and congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Sandra
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Date: 11/15/2016 7:23:00 AM
I like this. Did you know that there is 'Gong Therapy? It is less whacky than it sounds. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 11/15/2016 1:21:00 AM
The imageries in this poem seem to be alive and sentient. Amazing write and congratulation Carly!
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Date: 11/15/2016 12:30:00 AM
Nice imagery. Congrats Carly!
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Date: 11/14/2016 9:51:00 PM
Heartfelt, Carly! Congrats!
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