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Crushed Weeds

stencils of night’s mist brush your graveyard with ash dye laying on crushed weeds... this heart spills a requiem and my tune—love’s offering. ..................................... Brian Strand's Contest 245

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Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2016 8:23:00 PM

Sadly beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Janis Thompson

Date: 12/6/2016 10:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win. Great tanka.

White Wolf

Date: 12/6/2016 10:52:00 PM

An excellent win, Nette!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2016 10:40:00 PM

Wonderful, Nette. Big congrats

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/6/2016 8:47:00 PM

Big congrats Nette!! Well done!! Big Hugggs. Deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2015 6:11:00 PM

Congrats on your deligthful winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2015 3:46:00 PM

Congrad's on your win nette! Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2015 9:55:00 PM

Nice win...PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2015 9:33:00 AM

Excellent, Nette. Congrats.

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 11:57:00 PM

Nette, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~

Eve Roper

Date: 2/15/2015 3:08:00 PM

Nette, an artist you are, a 7 wonderful deep, sad write. Congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2015 11:29:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/14/2015 6:42:00 PM

A big win for you, with this stunning tanka, Nette ! Congratulations !

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/14/2015 3:10:00 PM

Nette, a huge, heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/13/2015 10:32:00 PM

Spectacular, Nette! The sorrow and love is weaved into the imagery...best wishes in Rick's contest :) hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2015 6:57:00 AM

- Oh, lovely written Nette - Luck in contest !- I wish you a romantic Valentine's Day, and a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/13/2015 12:22:00 AM

You just melted my heart

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2015 8:42:00 AM

Uniquely written contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/12/2015 8:30:00 AM

Your images sing of sadness and longing. Beautiful!

David Meade

Date: 2/11/2015 8:07:00 PM

This outpouring of grief is poignant and deep . . . a perfect love offering even the mist gives of itself!

Leon Datu

Date: 2/11/2015 5:48:00 PM

Nette, that thud of pain creates a heartfelt sadness, yet flowing with some tenderness. You are a poet of high caliber, "and my tune—love’s offering."

Jan Allison

Date: 2/11/2015 5:20:00 PM

Such a beautiful flow to this deep sad write Nette;-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx