Crush

Crush When I see you My day's complete My heart, beat Faster like a drum in a Parade you like a star shining in the night you are my INSPIRATIOn to move with my DESTINATION

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:20:00 PM

Jaira, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 4:32:00 PM

Hi Jaira :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2014 10:17:00 PM

Jaira,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jaira Cadenas
Date: 7/22/2014 5:28:00 AM

thank you very much for your warmness welcome dear!, I am not good poetry maker but I really like poems, and i try my best as i can to create a poems and i know I can do it, the only thing I need is the feedback of the viewers so that i can improve my work.Once again. Thank you!!!

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/21/2014 8:46:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jaira. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Jaira Cadenas
Date: 7/22/2014 5:30:00 AM

thank you dear!!!,

James Hyler

Date: 7/21/2014 4:59:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2014 10:24:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jaira :) - I choose your first sweet written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)