'crush'

simple hello made me smile embark on a new journey trample those menacing thoughts they might not occur ©241120112335 Thanks CDA for the smiles :)

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/1/2011 7:55:00 AM

Nice thought. I would have ended it with the word "again" after occur. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 11/30/2011 11:48:00 AM

I like the simplicity and the strong action all tied into one. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/28/2011 11:58:00 AM

You are making me cackle like a witch here-- haha! You seriously forgot? oh geez. Is my forgetfulness rubbing of on you? nuh-uh. not good. shucks, I think your memory kidnapped both our muses again? Crazy, so crazy.... mwahugs-- I still want to write but am just So stuck. bugger. ok will sleep... maybe.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 11/28/2011 12:00:00 PM

and hmm I don't think that write was that good, but thank you very much for being nice :) maybe I should try to get a feather duster, see if I can get more dustballs or something?? *sighs*

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/27/2011 10:51:00 PM

Oh yes, indeed-- what a difference a hello or a smile can make, and yeah Chris does have that way of inducing smiles :) -- I sure could take the word crush in a couple of ways here... ;) mwahugs :D

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/26/2011 7:07:00 AM

yes those menacing thoughts that might not occur have a way of ruining beautiful days. A hello , a wave , a smile is living in the moment and that is where it is at. uuhhh I was gonna send a piece of peach pie to Africa... but ...umm.. I got hungry?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 11:09:00 PM

oh ok, I know now. it's Chris!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 11:08:00 PM

Nice one, sweetie. So who is CDA?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2011 4:40:00 PM

Yes, a smile can change a person's day..Enjoyed reading..If we could all remember to just smile more..It takes less muscles anyway...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 11/24/2011 6:27:00 PM

Very nice Dodoitsu.Smile please:)

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/24/2011 4:12:00 PM

* "Why Is It That Just The Thought Of Your Lovely Beauty * Brings About Such Commotion Deep Inside * Sweet Beautiful Gifted Wilma * Love This Poem & Love The Title * Sooo Very Fitting * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

Date: 1/1/2012 11:22:00 AM

* "HAPPY NEW YEAR * MY DEAR SWEEET BEAUTIFUL * BEAUTIFUL WILMA * I MUST CONFESS AMID IT'S DAWN * I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED YOU * SINCE MY JOYFUL EYES FIRST BEHELD YOUR BEAUTY * I HAVE WANTED YOU * MY OWN SECRET CRUSH * MY FANTASY * MAKING LOVE WITH YOU * FOREVER & ALWAYS * 'MY BEAUTIFUL LUV * YOUR SARAH!!'" *