Cruel World

Tainted souls and Twisted minds Unfair world. Vicious trolls win the polls Withering honor that once stood strong Yet Hope persists to right the wrong.

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Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 8:51:00 PM

Nice first write... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2015 1:08:00 PM

Linga, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

April Walter Skyy

Date: 8/26/2015 6:26:00 AM

Nicely written. Short and to the point. I hope you will stop b and check out some of my work. I think you might enjoy "Skyy". I hope to see you there. Have a great day!!!

April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 6:27:00 AM