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Crows Heckle

Snow drifts in the bones
Cold earth absorbs the fallen
Crows heckle the wake

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 9:29:00 PM
    I'm no expert at haiku but I do know that the syllable counts in each line are accurate and that it's a perfect write in regards to nature. Milt

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:54:00 PM
    [snow drifts/ upon the field of bones--crows cackle] 2 parts now you have 3 parts Luke, now you have 3 sentences for haiku you want a frozen moment in time, no complete thoughts,everything open for the reader to see and hear. perhaps you could get 2 haiku out of this image haiku 2 [the ground/absorbs the fallen--snow falls] hope this helps Light & Love

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    Date: 3/19/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahh yes I see what you're saying . Thanks.