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Crow's-Feet

so lovely , yet wearied and worried, as she looks away with quiet terror from the sight of the faintest wrinkles at the corners of her eyes in the mirror; he finds it silly, this undue anxiety, as she mumbles about crow's feet that on her face she dreads to see, reflection she is uneager to meet; he assures her they are but laugh lines, the true traces of real joys, happy times, just skin-deep hints of deep-seated bliss, amused, touched she is by this view of his.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 11/3/2008 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful! Everyone should feel as you. Congratulations Romeo on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:58:00 AM
Romeo congrats on having this tender poem featured this week - Loved it - God Bless
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:54:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your poem being featured!
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:20:00 PM
Amazing how we each perceive the same sistuations so differently. I must say - i agree with your view. Sensational writing my friend. Lainie
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:50:00 PM
Congrats Romeo on the featuring of "Crow's-feet." Vince
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