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Crown of Thorns

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Crown of Thorns

Crown of Thorns
A trace of thorns you are on my body, I am an eternal traveller, never stopping. You are the bitter predicament of my comfort, Traces of sensual pleasures - The mist of a veil is my constant reminder. You wound the stubble of my heartly thorns, I stand alone on the dusty conflagration Gazing towards an endless void, I am bridled with the burning pain of the thorns... My gaze tirelessly roves, Prickly are the thorns, With malediction entwined... I am drowning in a sweaty torrent, I am plunging into thorny depths, bloody and overworked from the struggle, I yield myself to the decision of fate.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:04:00 PM
    This is a great poem! I'll have to check your other three poems out? You could check my ten poems out too if you want..I've been on Poetry Soup since November. Happy Holidays and much success for you is my wish!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:48:00 AM
    A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Rinaldo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:53:00 PM
    A very well written poem Rinaldo - I wish you a good and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 12/10/2012 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You dear Anne Lise! I have had a lot of questions and fears to my translator how will look like from Gypsy to english. But my translator is native UK Citizen her mother is from Slovenia. And here we are, the translation is the best, but the translator aswell....She is a nice young lady, Alice Waller. Bye!
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup, you'll find a friendly group of folks here! One heck of an entry write there. Please do enter my contests. Light & Love