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Crossroads

Lost...Confused...Undecided, Should I continue...or should I change direction. Their views on this; my trusted friends have shown. Lost in the emptiness of my mind. Drowning in the water of confusion Undecided...on who should I be with, Can not focus.. For it's shrouded by these thoughts. Wanting to be with one when I'm with the other, Wanting to be on that side...when I'm on this side. To think differently of my Future.. To worry if I can change my Present.. And leave everything in the Past.. I need to make my decision I need to make it now, but I'm still.. Stuck at these crossroads. Lost...Confused...Undecided.

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Date: 6/27/2013 2:26:00 PM
Braden gl in choosing your path follow your heart. I enjoyed your poem congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:55:00 PM
Braden , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:27:00 AM
Lost...Confused...Undecided, Barden, I call that an introduction. I enjoy poems with small introductions like that. It helps understanding the poem. Many time i don't know what to expect at a crossroad. maybe that is why i derail the streets into a broken path. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 5/31/2013 7:05:00 AM
Brandy, at crossroads look for the one that leads you to the cross; the right direction to take is the way up.
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:31:00 PM
nice write and yes every one goes through this dilemma .its just the guts to listen one's heart and go in that way.
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