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Crossing the Creek

I crossed the rowdy stream Jumping from stone to stone A small outdoor adventure Can I make it across alone? Water rushing round my feet My arms flailing to and fro Finally safe on the other side Dang! Now back I have to go....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/16/2011 9:43:00 AM
What a very cute write, Barbara :) enjoyed this one and almost felt like I wanted to go cross that creek as well :D way to go for being in the winners' list
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:02:00 AM
Very interesting metaphoric value, dear LNC. It's hard to "make it across alone," isn't it? The struggle never ends. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:02:00 AM
Very interesting metaphoric value, dear LNC. It's hard to "make it across alone," isn't it? The struggle never ends. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Stones" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:53:00 AM
LOL, Many congrats to you, Barbara : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:03:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of rick, Barbara
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:06:00 PM
This is short and sweet, such a cute little poem on skipping those stones! Congratulations, Barbara.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:56:00 PM
Congrats BG on your HM in the Stones contest with another lovely entry ..
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