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Crossing the Backwoods

anacreontic verse The path seems clear before me. Strolling before daybreak, each step becomes a test for my lack of concentration. Up ahead, a tangle of vines forces awareness, brings blood to my cheek. Unseen rocks and holes disturb my gait; my ankle complains. I resolve to return to this path with proper tools, chop the briars, and move the rocks to fill the holes. Encroaching further upon nature’s yard, I am warned by striking red skies as sunrise dawns. Decision is made. I will leave this place untouched by human hands.

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:29:00 PM
REASON, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:10:00 PM
greeat stuff, reason.. sending my big cheers on your win!..huggs
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:33:00 PM
thanks, nette, I appreciate the read and remarks.
Date: 1/20/2016 5:14:00 AM
How lovely Reason.. enjoyed reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks, Dr. Upma, I appreciate the read and good wishes.
Date: 1/19/2016 9:06:00 PM
Reason, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat..
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Ed's contest.
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:05:00 PM
Congrats Reason, thank you for entering :)
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Date: 1/20/2016 7:27:00 AM
thanks, Ed. Enjoyed the writing of it and appreciate the honorable. Have a great day in the realms of poetry.
Date: 1/14/2016 8:30:00 PM
Reason A. Poteet, is this your real name? anyhow, your poem brings me to so many scenes in movies where a person is trying to get away from his/her villain.. I like how you put this in your poem.. =`) enjoyed the read ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:35:00 PM
Last name is real; first is a pseudonym, nick name given me first by my husband. Thanks for the genuine comment, I enjoyed it.

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