Crossing Over

some say the dead are lost souls without vessels ~ life on a doomed dinghy

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2023 2:05:00 PM

Very creatively put together work. Some people are always wrong and some people get it right sometime. Thanks for sharing this extraordinary work and for stopping by my page. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/15/2023 12:58:00 AM

Thank you Sara, probably a political dig going on behind the scenes here, I’m sure more can be done to try sort out the mess it is, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 8/9/2023 4:07:00 PM

Very deep David, not sure I'd stop to discuss the concept too long and I maybe should have saved this one for pre midnight rather than post!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2023 12:06:00 AM

Heya Dilly, without getting too controversial, but one would probably have a better chance of swimming across the Styx than crossing over on the migrant boat death traps, sad state of affairs, cheers David

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/9/2023 3:13:00 PM

may be, there is no difference between life and death, a deep monoku to think about, thanks

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/9/2023 3:26:00 PM

In the migrant boat sinking sense, crossing over is pretty much the same, thank you Yann, cheers David