Critique Nazi (Poetry Game) To Become What You Wanted

for now i am empty blank emotionless but soon enough i will fill that whole edit myself with all you remarks and believe you me the comments that go along that you write will be writing me for now i am a shell a hollow wonderful thing and then you come along tell me a thought or feeling and i add it in and leave you to wonder where it went how i did it and i become everything you said to me One poem written by many through my minds eye and hand one poem right here for you to see i am the shell of nothing lonely and waiting for the comment to change me the inspirational words to satisfy someone who will unsatisfy someone else until all are satisfied and i am something no longer hollow no longer shallow a lesson in learning critiques of nature and everything you could have would have should have said is right here I will become everything you say i should be everything you say i am i will exaggerate everything i should add check or change your will be done this page becomes everything to somebody begging for control this page loses all sense of it as we take turns leading blindly