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Critics

one insufficient word the downfall of ones mistake the passion for what you love, they crumble, destroy and take they feed on the weak deprived that just want to do good or bad they critique your every move or action the pride of destroying ones life, or family the critics are the modern day haters they hide through newspapers and commercials telling the world of how you could've down something better, downing the positive and injecting the negative the print out one image or one word the word of indignity to society but they are here to motivate us to do better to prove that the critics are the obstacles life have chosen for us so touch people with your passion and don't let critics break your spirt

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Date: 8/14/2010 4:29:00 AM
A well deserved win, fago
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:30:00 AM
Great write. There has never been a statue erected to a critic, but you see statues everywhere of the people that have been criticized! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:30:00 AM
Good morning and late congatulations Fago!!!, enjoyed your poem. Have a good and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations (Fago) on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Slam!!! Slam!!! Slam!!! . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Fago on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this fantastic write.. now enjoy your spot in the winners circle tonight.. with luv..
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