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Crispy Leaves

Crispy leaves Trees shed reds, browns and golden - Coloured layers of a cake. Written December 1st, 2014 For One broken Monoku contest by Rick Parise Awarded 1st place

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Date: 12/30/2014 6:07:00 AM
Dr. Upma, you baked a beautiful cake. Well done, my dear.
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Date: 12/29/2014 4:49:00 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/29/2014 2:31:00 AM
crispy, tasty to poetic bud. Love Upma, Congrats. Best wishes for 2015.--rajat
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:00:00 AM
DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/27/2014 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on the win Upma...huggs
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Date: 12/27/2014 9:20:00 PM
a crispy cake!!! Cool win, sweetie. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:22:00 PM
I love this monoku, A Fav!
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:14:00 PM
Nice image, Dr. Sharma! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2014 5:52:00 PM
Back to say many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 4:19:00 PM
Congrats on your top placing, Upma! Ending the year in style:) // paul
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:38:00 PM
congratulations on this win Dr S
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:23:00 AM
Reads like a winner ..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2014 3:57:00 PM
Delicious. I love layered cake. Great idea Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 12/1/2014 3:29:00 PM
Tasty image, Dr Upma! You are wonderful at these short forms...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:14:00 PM
:) YUMMY! You are as sweet as that cake, Dr Upma! Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:29:00 PM
Lovely with dazzling imagery! Excellent Monoku! GL in the contest! Pandita
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Date: 12/1/2014 11:40:00 AM
Beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan x
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