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Crimson Sky

Crimson sky at eventide As the sun begins to hide Twilight comes, crickets croon "Neath starry skies and golden moon Crimson sky, a beautiful sight Slowly blending into night As fireflies burst with light, they dance Leading lovers on the path of romance Crimson sky paints a picturesque horizon As daylight fades with the sun As the ball of fire descends and simmers The restless ocean begins to shimmer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/22/2013 7:36:00 PM
Great work, Joseph. This is about my bedtime and your beautiful treatment of evening brings on yawns... Good night... This is better than Melatonin... See ya later.... Jake
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:50:00 PM
Hi Joesph, I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:30:00 AM
Stunning Imagery and descriptive used in this poem. Loved it-- my favorite things-- Sky at dusk, moon and Ocean.
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:21:00 PM
CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~
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Joseph May
Date: 5/20/2013 6:27:00 AM
thank you for my placement in your contest Skat...
Date: 5/16/2013 7:18:00 AM
- Pleased to read your poem today Joseph, beautiful. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/20/2013 6:28:00 AM
thank you Anne...hugs

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