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Crimson Shadow

Sitting, thinking, darkness pervades Crimson shadows stain my brain My thoughts awash in shades of grey Nothingness... nothing, only pain ----- Oh, the stains, the crimson stains! Oh, how the stains invade my brain! Head hung low in deepest musing Not a hope, always losing Pressing hard my fingers straining Stain upon my temple remaining Oh, the stains, the crimson stains! Oh, the pain, the insipid pain! Mad, the visions slowly creeping In my head they wake from sleeping Blood red maggots, always slinking Squeeze them tight, their crimson, bleeding Oh, the stains, in my brain! Oh, abhorrence to obtain! ----- Mind slips, concentration degrades Debasing crimson shadows ingrained Will is lost as feelings fray Haunting emotions, unexplained ----- Oh, the stains, the crimson stains! Oh, the horror they retain! Viscous thoughts like liquid oozing Blackness engulfs each shadow's choosing Reflections through the twilight peeking In my heart my soul is shrieking Oh, the stains, the crimson stains! Oh, how it pulses through my vein! The time is lost to pablum speaking Verbose ideas are sorrows seeking Darkened thoughts now are growing Replaced by words concise and flowing Oh, the stains, in my brain! Oh, dark reflections can't remain ----- Crimson shadows or crimson shades Darkness fades to light again Lucent shadows, some will stay As crimson shadows in my brain 07/29/15

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Date: 8/25/2015 8:59:00 AM
How one is washed away by waves of depression sometimes changing to an entirely different person unrecognizable. All this quite nicely dished out here. Good job.
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James Inman
Date: 8/25/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Samiha. The darkness of depression can be overwhelming, luckily for most of us it eventually subsides.
Date: 7/30/2015 10:26:00 AM
James, a beautiful write, I really like the lines, oh, the stains, the crimson stains! Oh, the horror they retain! A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Senryu 15 and all your other visits to my poetry with wonderful comments, so appreciated
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James Inman
Date: 7/30/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, BW, for sparing the time to visit my poems. I know there are so many out there from which to choose and so little time (at least for me). Your choosing mine... let's just say I respect your opinion and it is always a pleasure reading your work. Thank you again. rjijr
Date: 7/29/2015 2:07:00 PM
Excellence! A 7!
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James Inman
Date: 7/30/2015 7:31:00 AM
Anna, I'm very happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you.

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