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Crimson Marks

Winter’s hoar…frost.. has bled the maples Crimson, marks the torn throat of morn. Summer’s sullen forays have scared the natural blush of Fall. Would the wood recover from the toxic fumes of man? Radiant the sun which bombs the atmosphere, a blight of cancer upon the uncloaked skin… Mutant and mutating man warring harbinger of doom. Where sand and soil and microbes had cleansed the refuse of man waits… clogging the arteries of bipeds overflowing into the roots of forest Unarmed Rooted Clinging to the seed of an apothecary life. Feeding on the vials unturned draining into the Fall finery a mottled military camouflage sickly green, to burnt brown emerges. And all that’s left of life bleeds with the maple. Crimson, marks the torn throat of morn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/15/2011 2:43:00 AM
I just love the way this circles back to the beginning stanza. Very good imagery, Debs. One of your very fine free verse poems.
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:46:00 AM
A very worthy write Debbie, i was enchanted to read this morning, and thank you for the helpfull comments, on the poem, i had thought being i titled it an Ode, it was probably out of context anyway..? however your comments are greatfully recived..
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:32:00 AM
Amazing descriptions to fascinate and deep meaning Debbie - perfect description of the season I love best. Thanks for posting luv
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:08:00 PM
that's some nitty gritty for ya. Many preeshes for the write, Debbie. Beauty eve to ya, namaste~N
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