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Crimson Fall

Drips down my head Looking at the sky Bright and red Slow and just still Here waiting And so I will Falling on the asphalt Drip, drip, drip Slowly tearing my heart Mother nature I'm torn and crying Don't leave me asunder 5/24/2013 Rain, rain, rain Contest Entry. Pls. Leave a Comment

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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/30/2013 7:56:00 PM
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lost in rain3x contest. sucks bigtime
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/30/2013 12:29:00 AM
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very nicely done ;} Under the dome starts Mon. June 24 CBS. My daughter gave me the book,,,,watch preview on Utube ;}
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/30/2013 1:01:00 AM
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ok thanks. gonna check it out later.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2013 4:49:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading your creative work..I had not heard the song "Laura" so I looked it up..My poem was about my biological mother who died and left me 15 months old, a son 6 years old, a son 9 or 11 years old, a son around 16 and another son 19 to 21 years old..By todays longevity she died way too young...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/28/2013 6:55:00 PM
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did you like the song, Think of Laura? its one of my oldies song favorites, also other songes by Bread
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 5/28/2013 8:53:00 AM
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awesome poem friend Nato...thanks for passing by...have a nice day :)
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/28/2013 6:59:00 PM
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God bless in future writings. Good day Paz
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 5:00:00 AM
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Hi Nato, raining here in Wales also, but it is brightening so sun on its way.....Nice poem good luck ...Seren
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/28/2013 6:56:00 PM
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thanks for stopping by. have a nice day
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 6:12:00 AM
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Full of anguish and pain...well expressed. Hope the sun comes out soon! :)
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/27/2013 8:08:00 PM
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nah it's still rainy season here in the Philippines. I hope it stops raining soon

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