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Crimsom Beauty

My tears fall like the petals of a red rose. Soon the floor will be covered in it's crimson beauty.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 7:30:00 PM

Sheol, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 8:49:00 AM

REviewing my fav poems list today and came across this one again. Still a beauty!!!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/19/2010 8:34:00 AM

This is just an awesome monologue. The reflection is excellent. Great job! Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2010 12:42:00 PM

Such pain and sadness in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/6/2010 12:33:00 PM

Such lovely imagery with just two lines Sheol .. thankxxx and appreciate your kind and special comment on my tribute to the great Jimi Hendrix... he was such a legend and icon and his music is phenomenal still..since u are a fan too why not write something and enter Raul's contest .. they are exciting to enter and interesting to read all the different views on one theme.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart" Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2010 12:29:00 PM

sheol, soup mail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2010 12:23:00 PM

sheol, this is just beautiful. If you don't mind a few spelling tips: petals and its. I really love this. For FAVS!

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/5/2010 12:34:00 AM

Hi Sheol, the sadness of the tears and the beauty of the rose combine to make this an emotional work, well done..thank you for stopping by ...Margaret

Susan Palli

Date: 5/4/2010 10:58:00 AM

can see the sadness