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Crescent Moon

Oh, crescent moon in the inky sky above, I wish, WISH that I could fly up and rest within your curve, together we could watch the twinkly stars, until you fade and then I would just fall, F A L L gently back into my bed. _______________________________ December 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Crescent Moon Copyright Protected, ID 16-859-404-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Moon Spoon Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2016 5:21:00 PM

I sure did love yours, Constance. BIG congrats. I Hope I do not miss your C contest. Gotta be away till Sunday. Luv, Andrea

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/27/2016 1:38:00 PM

So good, Constance - we all must talk to the moon, and you do.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2016 12:13:00 PM

A lovely 3 liner; resting in the moon's curve makes such a lovely image, Constance. Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2016 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/27/2016 10:28:00 AM

Congrats!!! BW...beautifuly said my friend...god bless...^WW^

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2016 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Broken Wings. Falling and falling back into bed, is a different take on the theme, which I like, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2016 10:55:00 AM

Constance, I love the way you put yourself by the moon resting in its curve. This is the definition of spooning , well, one definition of it. And it's lovely that you incorporated the idea within your poem. This should do well.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2016 2:10:00 PM

oh how beautiful your imagery is Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 12/19/2016 1:50:00 PM

Wow, enchantingly beautiful. I absolutely loved this poem. Good luck in this contest.