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Creepy Story

Creepy story Obnoxious feeling and I was sweating, Palpitations peaked the legs frozen in scare, I could barely see through veils of dense fog, "Grudge" ghost creeping as I was dreaming, Woke up off deep sleep ! Written Oct 16th, 2015 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma Entered for contest- Trashed#3 Sponsor- Broken wings Awarded 6th place win

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/11/2015 8:41:00 AM

This piece reminds me of ugly nightmares I have had! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2015 2:04:00 PM

spooky write Dr Sharma - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 11/9/2015 11:15:00 AM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2015 1:02:00 PM

Many a dream has made a sleeper scream. My son was one of them. Jumping off a top bunk bed many a time. Scary but true poetry Dr. Upma, smiles, James :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/17/2015 4:59:00 PM

Upma, now that's a creepy dream, 7 and best of luck, and thanks for visiting my poem, dads workshop ~~

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/17/2015 11:59:00 AM

This is an interesting, succinct poem that intrigued me, Dr. Upma! Great job, and good luck in the contest :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2015 5:11:00 AM

Ooooo...creepy it is, Upma! What a relief to find it's only a dream! gl in the contest. Have a lovely day. // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 2:42:00 AM

Very nice Dr. Sharma Ive had a few of those lol. Creepy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 8:17:00 PM

hmmm, puts me in mind of that scary Grudge movie! Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2015 12:19:00 PM

That was a nightmare..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/16/2015 11:11:00 AM

SPOOKY!! Oh...the dense fog makes anyone feel something is afoot. Lovely write, Dear Dr Upma. I'm sorry I haven't visited you of late. I've been away. Sending you hugs and good luck wishes.