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Creep

The shards left of the mirror still defy me While you stand shining beside me Radiant, you're radiant and glorious I lurk towards the shadows to hide me But I steal a fragment of the mirror The silver glass I love and despise I sit all alone in the corner And glare at my reflection with weeping eyes I creep in the shadows that hide me It seems a fitting word now, creep. For while you smile in daytime and nighttime I'm unforgivably rotten even in my sleep. Would things be better if I stayed to myself? Would it change if you left me alone? No. I'd still have the image of your perfection Haunting my every nerve and bone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/9/2017 6:29:00 PM
I can see why this one made the winners list.congratulations.
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Date: 12/29/2016 3:34:00 PM
Juli....A poetic prize! Chuck
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Date: 12/5/2016 7:17:00 AM
Excellent write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:06:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, Juli-Michelle. Many congrats on your top-notch placement. Lainey
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Date: 12/1/2016 2:54:00 PM
Congrats well-done xx
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:24:00 AM
Hi Juli, Congratulations on your 1st place in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:16:00 AM
Very well written. Congratulations on your big win. I love it.
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Date: 11/29/2016 6:41:00 PM
What a sad piece this is. It speaks of one who is much less than beautiful seeking the shadows to hide the ugliness and watching wistfully as someone very beautiful enjoys all the blessings of being not ugly. Very well written and well expressed. Really good imagery. Thanks for the kind words on my "In My Rose Garden". God Bless and a 7 from me. JB
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Date: 11/29/2016 6:19:00 PM
Oh wow, this is excellent! Really creepy.. .. very good! I guess it's for the Creep contest? I couldn't think of anything to write... but you have nailed it! :)
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