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down the stairs down the creek creek is down creek is flowing flowing fast flowing under under glass under pass pass it over pass it slow slow poke slow down down and around down for the count count the money count is under under siege under the sun sun is hot sun went down down beat down south south west south bound bound up bound down down the road down time time out time to go go slow go under under appreciate under paid paid down paid up up the creek up or down down wind down a well well is full well is deep deep pockets deep and down down and out down and down down under down bridge bridge under © Eve Roper 8/11/2015 Contest Name: Down Under Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 9/12/2015 8:07:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2015 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placing in Debbie's contest! This flows smoothly like the creek that inspired it:) Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 9/8/2015 9:02:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 9/7/2015 4:23:00 PM
Eve hon the last few lines are wrong - this would be right [ down and out/down town- town under/town bridge-bridge-under] YOU came so close great effort! Congrad's Light & Love
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 8:13:00 AM
Hello Debbie, I did fix it before but I noticed it didn't let me corrected; the website has being having a lot of glitches thank goodness I try to save all my work. This is the one I had corrected. Thank you so very much for your help. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/7/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, I'm honored to have been in the contest Hugs Eve
Date: 9/6/2015 11:42:00 PM
Superb winning write Eve, big congrats!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 8/12/2015 12:53:00 AM
Gosh, I still don't get this form, but you sure make it look like a breeze. It had a great flow, Eve!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/12/2015 1:23:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, thought it was but then it got confusing towards the end.
Date: 8/11/2015 5:47:00 PM
Eve, at first look this form seems easy but it isn' t that easy when you get into it especially that ending and title, best of luck, just a little edit and you will be good to go and thanks for visiting my solitude poem
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, B.W., I hope I did it right this time. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/11/2015 5:20:00 PM
The last 4 lines are wrong, check the directions in the contest, please, you have time. [lines 49 & 50 are 1 word Eve] Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2015 3:34:00 PM
You went is many directions Eve...I bet if you started with the same words again it would turn out totally different....Tim
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Date: 9/11/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thank you dear friend , I should try that. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/11/2015 11:54:00 AM
Gosh Eve i have never tried this form before - think it is too much of a challenge for me ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/11/2015 12:12:00 PM
I thought the same but it turned out very easy, try it won't hurt, like your footle yours would be funny hugs eve

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