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I left myself along the way. At a place I could not stay. To slip and slide outside the past. Succumbing to a spell I cast. Breathing in a mystic air. Looking round while I just stare. Through windows into open doors. Sailing ships to long lost shores. While clocks keep ticking on the wall. You travel in a timeless stall. And you come back to realize. A magic journey is the prize.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2014 12:04:00 PM
Sometimes those magical journeys within our imagination are a good place to escape. ... Thank you for your wonderful comments on my words... Your friend always... Debra
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:54:00 AM
yes, such truth in this deep one!
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Date: 12/26/2014 6:46:00 AM
A fantastic trip, journeying into all that's possible. Great work.
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Date: 12/25/2014 3:18:00 AM
Well done, I like it...
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:21:00 PM
Hello, Creative Robert, the rhymer of all rhymers. Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:32:00 PM
love this, my friend
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:41:00 PM
Now that's a journey !! Excellent !!
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:16:00 AM
this is wonderful, robert! i especially like the first verse. there are many ways to travel and the way you've described is one we can all access...
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Date: 12/11/2014 2:46:00 PM
Very nice!! :) john.
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