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This is a Poetic Form, The Dizain.  I intended to write on the subject of Dr. Mehta's Dizain Contest but the muse took off in another direction.

Creation’s Crust Performing - a chorus line – life dancing the golden haired seductress saunters past temptress – pheromonally enhancing – sweet aura that descends as breezes pass, the innate scent of instinct’s net is cast. Mock battles that decide a species fate feathered prance seeking egos to deflate survival of the fittest will ensure that seasons are fulfilled and then abate - the struggle of creation thus endure. John G. Lawless 1/12/2015 //dizain//

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Date: 1/20/2015 7:38:00 PM
thanks for having an example of Dizain here. I need to do one for Ram's contest!! IS yours for that contest? I enjoyed this one.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/21/2015 6:51:00 AM
Andrea, I started to write it for the contest theme - "Heaven" but the muse wasn't in a very angelic frame of mind. It's a pesky little form. I may write another for the contest theme.

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