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Creation of Damnation

I have created life from death Proved I can cheat the reaper I have created the eternal man Brought him back from oblivion And still they call him a monster Let them mock me, I will not be stopped Let them try and storm this castle No one will control me, I am the Baron And they will bow down to my will I will rule with an army raised from the dead I gave him life, why does he defy me? He is my creation, his life is mine How dare he try to turn against my will How dare he try to be free He is mine, and he will always be mine We fought and he believes me to be dead I now lie here broken on the ice But no matter where he may hide I will hunt him down and destroy him The world has not seen the last of me, I will return

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 6:21:00 AM
Great read with a dark edge. Thanks for swinging by my page to comment
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:48:00 PM
As we all await the Second Coming.. a powerful write Chris.. keep our eyes to the sky.. enjoyed from Italy..caio..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 1:16:00 PM
Ps. Smile ~ Upon the reread, "I Love It;" seems to be such a battle of wills....Smile, "Brilliant My Friend;" this taste of tarragon; "Love," John!:) ~
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Date: 8/15/2010 1:04:00 PM
Smile ~ "Mysterious & Grim Reaperish My Friend" but, what is death but, a passing from one realm unto the next and, I know beyond a doubt, where my eternal place amid eternity shall be!!! ~ "Very Creative & Profound, Dear Chris" ~ "Much Love to You & Yours, Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Bright & Beautifully Gothic, Victoriously Love Laced Day;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:33:00 AM
Interesting write Chris, hope you are enjoying your day ¤ Wilma
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Date: 8/15/2010 9:14:00 AM
powerful expression of taking control versus being controlled.......peace , jay
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