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Roaming clouds move steadily south A broad circulation The golden sun still shines hidden Peeking on creation The noise of the day rises Quiet almost gone now Moments to hear soft bird calls Nearly disappeared somehow There is a dove cooing softly A rooster crows a weak sound All settled in the foggy hollow As car tires nosily abound

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Date: 6/12/2016 6:18:00 AM
Beautiful writing! Great imagery!
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:32:00 AM
Beautiful imagery write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/8/2016 3:41:00 PM
Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
Date: 6/7/2016 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful Sara, you tell it so well,,
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Date: 6/7/2016 5:21:00 PM
wonderful imagery Sara a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/8/2016 3:44:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..Sara

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