Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Created To Be Yours

Deb Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Created To Be Yours which was written by poet Deb Wilson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Deb Wilson

Best Deb Wilson Poems

+ Fav Poet

Created To Be Yours

Centered by you and your design,
in your sweet eyes the stars align.

Bright is the landscape near your heart,
you invited me in right from the start.

No wishful thinking just truth in spirit,
I'll sing my song so you can hear it.

Born to follow your shadow around,
your voice makes such a magical sound.

I'm in neck deep and won't let go,
there's purity in this love I know.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 11:55:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 2:26:00 PM
    Hey Deb, cool couplet you have here, true or not it is exactly right..hope you have entered my contest, you can do palindromes in your sleep, ..David

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson
    Date: 4/4/2012 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so much David
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:26:00 PM
    IM GLAD U FOUND HAPPINESS! THIS IS NICE DEB

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson
    Date: 4/4/2012 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    this is fictional..I'm not with anyone..just using my imagination
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 7:21:00 AM
    I love the word choice. It does make you feel very loved. But I don't know if it's the period at the end of each line, but it seems very abrupt to me. I feel it needs to flow more. Lovely job. Keep it up.

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson
    Date: 4/4/2012 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    changed it up a bit..do want the flow..thanks