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cream seeps from the sun

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cream seeps from the sun

Cream seeps from the sun
soaks dead eyelids with color...
Days lengthen to green.

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  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:56:00 PM
    Excellent Gerard one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 1:12:00 PM
    I'm agree with Karen, good imagery. Good Haiku Gerard

  1. Date: 3/4/2009 1:07:00 PM
    PS--I hope you entered this in the contest. If you did, best wishes. Karen

  1. Date: 2/21/2009 10:22:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery in your haiku. I can't wait for spring--will enjoy that green you talk about. Keep on writing! Karen