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Crazy Twist

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Crazy Twist

They were bestfriends before
Now thoughts conflict, not meeting anymore
No more smiles, friendship's abore
No more hello's, ambiguity has soar

The girl walked steadfastly
The guy bowed constantly
Lost like both doesn't want to see
The perfect constellation of being carefree

The autumn has begun
Soars up high, the King Sun
Cherry Blossoms started to fall
Both are waiting to crash the brick wall

The guy started picking..
Those fallen flowers while smiling
The girl sat on the bench, waiting
Eyes me, sadness started shrugging

They held hands in the middle of amidst
Pulses are jumping free on their wrists
Love has spoken, ready to take the risk
For once in a lifetime chance, a crazy twist.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Your poetry shows much promise, Charmin. Keep on writing... David