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Crazy Or Lazy

Whatever God you believe in, he must be crazy, Everywhere in the world there seems to be turmoil; It seems to me that the Gods have gotten lazy. In Canada, we have issues with our crude oil, In the U.S. there are deadly tornadoes, storms; Everywhere in the world there seems to be- turmoil. The world nowadays is just full of prickly thorns, The Gods must be crazy to allow all this to be; In the U.S - there are deadly tornadoes, storms. Shooting, stabbing, terrorist! Oh, can you not see, Refugees of horrible wars are flooding countries; The Gods must be crazy- to allow all this to be. Coalition forces attack far off cities, Global Warming- Canadian balmy winters; Refugees! Of horrible wars are flooding countries; Coalition forces- attack, far off cities, Whatever God you believe in, he must be crazy; Global Warming, Canadian balmy winters, It seems to me that the Gods have gotten, lazy. ___________________________ December 25, 2015 Terzanelle For the contest, The Gods Must be Crazy, sponsor, John Lawless Fifth Place

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Date: 1/26/2016 10:26:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2016 8:50:00 AM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 1/20/2016 9:25:00 AM
My sentiments as well, BW. Wonderful poem! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 10:25:00 AM
Ralph, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful and congratulations !
Date: 1/19/2016 11:32:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2016 6:28:00 PM
Thanks Sandra for the congratulations and the hugs !
Date: 1/18/2016 9:07:00 PM
Wonderful win... Love SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2016 1:53:00 AM
thanks
Date: 1/18/2016 9:02:00 PM
AH, the Terzanelle, repeating lines, repeating weather, repeating chaos and confusion. The repetition of repetition done to perfection. Thanks for participating in the contest BW
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2016 1:55:00 AM
John, thanks for liking my Terzanelle, I have been experimenting with forms lately, and I really like the repeating lines in this form and well thank you so much for my great placement in your awesome contest, honored
Date: 1/1/2016 6:42:00 PM
Love how you did this, Broken Wings! You have handled the theme so well in this Terzanelle Form. All the best for the Contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2016 7:18:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting and the nice comment, I am really liking this form Terzanelle, I love the repeating lines ~
Date: 12/29/2015 10:43:00 AM
The form works really well here, BW. Good choice. The repeated lines help to stress the "crazy" theme of the poem. Very well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:18:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit and the encouragement, appreciate ~
Date: 12/26/2015 3:52:00 PM
superb way of handling the theme, constance... reality bites; i just hope there will be more peace soon... huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2015 8:29:00 PM
nette, thanks for visiting and for the forever support ~
Date: 12/26/2015 2:34:00 PM
A very good poem sad but true x Merry Christmas x Wendy
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2015 8:30:00 PM
Wendy, thanks so much for visiting, merry Christmas to you also ~
Date: 12/26/2015 12:26:00 AM
I must be God, I am crazy and lazy! What a creative wonderful poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2015 8:31:00 PM
Arthur, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful ~
Date: 12/25/2015 4:58:00 PM
Broken, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2015 8:32:00 PM
PD, thanks for the wonderful comments ~
Date: 12/25/2015 4:17:00 PM
by the way, a very merry Christmas to you. ARE you with any friends. I am all by my lonesome and I need to hurry here so I can shovel the dang sidewalk . At least 8 inches of snow fell last night. ugggg.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2015 8:33:00 PM
With family for christmas
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 5:30:00 PM
Andrea, omg, 8" of snow, we have none, merry Christmas to you also
Date: 12/25/2015 4:16:00 PM
wow, Constance. this is QUITE QUITE good!!!! I am impressed. You are top of the class today!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 5:32:00 PM
Andrea oh thanks for the quite quite good ..
Date: 12/25/2015 11:12:00 AM
Everywhere in the world we have turmoil - oh so true BW - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 2:27:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit and the encouragement, appreciate

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