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Crazy

Strong self-regulation plays a role as the character named tenet She stands on a human imperfection as being unequal The silence which tries to wriggle in a surge of life Successfully tickled her peace, her serenity Try to wash away all the black and white under her consciousness Private figure imprisoned her in mirage She opens her eyes and tear down all the walls Stand on the insecurity she found her self in hollow... Drowning in a sea of fears... The brutality of words rape her morality They took those pictures of her and replaced her into a limbo She lives unsteadily, she wished to be saved Blindness was coming later along with the beautiful paradise but fake ... This crisis did not stop ... Shout through the empty space She began to dissolve within her nature For the implication of silence had rotten Deep abyss creates her in bitter and sore....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 10:36:00 AM
Congrats Yanny on your win~A.O
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Abdul :D wishing you a wonderful day :D, hug, yanny
Date: 5/7/2013 11:23:00 AM
Well done Yanny, I think many people will relate to your words. All are imperfect and trying to come to terms with their humanity. Many become lost within the spaces in their minds afraid to emerge from the comfort of their darkness.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2013 6:12:00 PM
so far so good. Hugs back.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/7/2013 5:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Rick :D loved to be the participant in your wonderful contest :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/6/2013 8:24:00 PM
Yanny, I love the way you brought on the Crazy. Congratulations!!! :-) .....xox..... LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/6/2013 8:33:00 PM
thank you Lindaa :D missing you here :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/6/2013 7:56:00 PM
Yanny, CONGRATS <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/6/2013 8:19:00 PM
Thank you S.K.A.T. :D glad to have a visit by you :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/22/2013 12:07:00 AM
"The brutality of words rape her mortality" - Yanny - brilliant line!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/22/2013 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Mike, this is also my fave line too :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, yanny
Date: 4/18/2013 3:44:00 PM
amazing poetry Yanny, and so inspiring...
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/18/2013 5:38:00 PM
Thank you Harry, glad to see a comment from you today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/17/2013 10:49:00 AM
A powerful poem Yanny, dark shadows behind the facade .... sad. - A well written poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Anne, sometimes the sadness could drives us crazy :p thank you for your visit Anne glad to see you around :D wishing you wonderful day :) hug, yanny

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