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           Gothic Romance Paintings | Fine Art America

While candles tease with an enraptured need, two figures slither as midnight exalts an urge to imbue passion, they concede-- to rhapsody of lark which never halts a slow-burn desire when waxed limbs entwine ; opening caves of souls… fluid balm drips upon thrilled gasps, long no more to decline summer’s heat, dizzy like kiln of fired lips: Fulfilling magic spells in glorious tints such appetite roams to covet a lair till peaks of delight ease long hours’ imprints caressing glides of their flamed love affair. Blitheness twirls, swirls around an earnest noon-- Relishing the potion of honeymoon. Summer Heat Contest of John Hamilton ~ With slight revisions after posting~ 6/12/2020

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Date: 6/14/2020 12:52:00 AM
This is amazing Nette! Congratulations on your Second Placement! xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 6:16:00 PM
This is gorgeous at so many levels with dripping love and passion Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 11:10:00 AM
An amazing write Nette, I had to dock you a point for putting a different title but this is a stunningly great poem that could not be ignored, congrats on a shared 2nd place win!
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Date: 6/13/2020 10:12:00 AM
Charming hints of love and romance--flaming summer heat of hearts. All the best, Nette.
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