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Crashed Love

Teardrops slipping, sliding, falling unceremoniously Bruised and battered, this broken hearted agony. Memories arise of the times gone before When being in love with you held promises of something more. Silently my world comes crashing again Leaving a twisting, turning, searing pain. Little did I imagine it would have turned out like this A sudden end to all our Dreams of bliss... Confused…. I don’t understand these words That are said they pass through me Right through my head Sometimes I wish that it all would end Just get it over I would just go around that bend I’m not depressed I’m just ready to give up My life has been filled Just like my cup Oh well Life just keeps coming And people lying…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/15/2008 8:58:00 AM
I luv it... its really good!!! How old are you? I'm 14 lol....
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Date: 11/14/2008 6:36:00 AM
You're a human being, Alexz. You deserve no less than the happiness and joy that others have. Believe in yourself. It may be difficult at first but you need to take the first steps. Independence is important. Your feelings get hurt too easily. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/14/2008 6:12:00 AM
Im 15 as well its kewl to meet someone my age on here...i'd love to be firends =]] your a realy good poet btw
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Date: 11/12/2008 6:27:00 AM
Awsomeness poem alexz truely loved it this is one of my fav poems now its so moving and reminds me of what a broken heart can do to a person. Keep Wrighting....Joanie
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