Get Your Premium Membership

Crash Death

Rolling waves crashed against the shore, thunder was cracking in the sky, and wild lightening flashed. My heart is in pieces, and in my mind I hear screaming, as your car falls over a cliff. ____________________________ May 25, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Hexastich/Crash Death Copyright Protected, ID 20-1254-794-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest Hexastich It sponsor, Nette OnClaud, Theme Chosen #3 Crash Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/30/2020 12:37:00 PM
love the twist at the end Constance:-) dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 11:16:00 AM
Your words are heartfelt Constance. Always reflecting the depths of your mind through sadness or joy. Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 11:13:00 AM
wow, this piercing, beautiful piece deserves a high win in my contest, constance...congrats and huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2020 12:58:00 AM
Great setup for the tragic ending. Well done, Constance, and congratulations on your win. Hugs ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2020 11:37:00 PM
Wow..A long story behind the short verse..And a sudden twist in the image..Great win Constance..Congrats..
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2020 4:51:00 AM
Ouch, that hurts ...
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2020 2:42:00 AM
wow you nailed it Constance, I wasn't expecting that ending!:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs